LucianoXBL

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many Errors

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
• Your Character Biography states that his parents were killed by bandits this falls under common character tropes. Please take a look at this link to read more!
  • common_character_tropes_link
• Your Physical Description stats that he has black eyes, No humans have black eyes. please take a look at the wiki
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Heartlanders
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Highlanders
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Farfolk
• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Changed Status to Denied