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LuckyMuddypaw

LuckyMuddypaw

By LuckyMuddypaw

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: Lucky Muddypaw #2274
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using the outside world to your advantage
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: basically plot armor being abused
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Tugging slightly on the hood of her cloak she wears when traveling to new places, she is slightly taken aback at the mans sudden question. "Hello, is there a guild or tavern nearby?" While he didn't seem ill intent, she was not going to tell him her reasons to being in town as she didn't know his motives. 

Character Name: Lucky Muddypaw
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Dark Blond hair, midnight blue eyes, thin, average height, wears handmade leather armor and a pair of wolf ears and a tail
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! (but
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography states that she is from Siramenor, Siramenor is a place from Arcas. This is last map and sadly can't be used. However the place you are talking about can not be found on this map Almaris. Here are some places though that you can be from.
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Category:Locations
  • Your Physical Description does not match the race you picked. please look at wiki, linked here and also this wood elf guide.
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves
  2. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/149754-wood-elven-appearance-guide/
  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Blake0205

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check above for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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