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stardust ruby

By stardust ruby

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Lyndsey#1521
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: basically rpg
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: getting the best or highest ending
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

I'm here to start an adventure in hopes to find myself

Character Name: stardust ruby
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: emo goth attire, purple eyes, purplehair, tiny built, 4 foot, 80 lbs
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Roleplay Definition is lacking information, please add more to it. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description can’t use “emo goth attire” as it does not fit with LotC’s medieval theme, and are modern-day terms.

  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match your character’s race; elves can’t be 4 foot tall.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Likes and dislikes are not personality traits.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your fears must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
    https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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