MAPLEMAN81

Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

• Your definition for Powergaming is incorrect, regarding your examples for it. Please be very certain of your definition, and avoid things such as “I’d say”. You also have a few spelling issue such as spelling “you” as “u” or “abilities” as “abilitys”, please do your best to fix them. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming
• Your backstory have quite a few grammar and spelling errors, please do the best of your ability to fix it (If you feel that you are unable to fix them, you may try running it through Grammarly). The backstory also requires at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.
• Your physical description needs to be redone. Although elf does age slower, 800+ years old is still considered old, as elves already become adult at the age of 50. Please also try and lengthen your descriptions by describing things such as the height and weight of your character.
• Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits
• For your roleplay response , I recommend surrounding your character’s dialogue with quotations.

When you have made the changes, feel free to

 contact me through discord at @mightbepan#9864 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

in our New Player Discord.

Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

→ Here are the changes you had to make.

• Your definition for Powergaming is incorrect, regarding your examples for it. Please be very certain of your definition, and avoid things such as “I’d say”. You also have a few spelling issue such as spelling “you” as “u” or “abilities” as “abilitys”, please do your best to fix them. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming
• Your backstory have quite a few grammar and spelling errors, please do the best of your ability to fix it (If you feel that you are unable to fix them, you may try running it through Grammarly). The backstory also requires at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.
• Your physical description needs to be redone. Although elf does age slower, 800+ years old is still considered old, as elves already become adult at the age of 50. Please also try and lengthen your descriptions by describing things such as the height and weight of your character.
• Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits
• For your roleplay response , I recommend surrounding your character’s dialogue with quotations.

You may reapply at any time.

If you find yourself in need of any assistance,

do send a Community Team Member or myself a friend request over discord

and PM them or myself at @mightbepan#9864. I’d be more than happy to help.