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MasterMozart
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: pokemacs
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I love to roleplay, Yet i fully print out all rules and post them so I am constantly reminded about the rules.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Any knowledge that a character shouldn't know can completely change the aspect of the game. It is critical for any outside knowledge to be kept separate from a character. This way no one can powergame.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

The air inside the tattered tent hung heavy with the scent of dampness and decay, a reflection of the swampy surroundings that enveloped the dim town. As I stepped inside, the flickering light from the suspended candles cast dancing shadows on the worn fabric walls. The feeble illumination revealed the outlines of shacks and cabins outside, huddled together in a melancholic symmetry. 
At the back of the tent, an old hag sat, her form hunched and withered, as if the weight of time itself pressed upon her shoulders. Her gaze though piercing, held a depth of wisdom that seemed to pierce through the layers of my being, Her eyes, like pools of ink, bore into me as she spoke, her voice croaking like the caw of a raven.
"What brings you to this dingy town?" she began, her words measured and deliberate. Then, as if her gaze could unravel secrets hidden within my very soul, she paused and studied my face. A shiver traced its way down my spine, a mixture of anticipation and unease. 
Her lips curled into a knowing smile, revealing a few remaining teeth like yellowed pearls. "Ah, it's you," she murmured as if confirming something only she understood. "I've been expecting you"

I complied with her gestured invitation, lowering myself onto the cushion she indicated. It creaked faintly under my weight, the sound blending with the symphony of distant croaking frogs and rustling leaves. The old hag's presence held a mystique that seemed to extend beyond the physical boundaries of the tent. 

"Tell me your story, she beckoned, her voice carrying a command that brooked no resistance. And so, with a mixture of trepidation and fascination, I began to recount the tale that led me to this desolate place, a tale of journeying through unknown lands, of encounters with both beauty and danger and of the inexplicable feeling that my destiny was intertwined with the secrets concealed within this murky town and its enigmatic inhabitants. 

As the worlds flowed, the candles above flickered and cast ever-shifting patterns of light and shadow on the tent's walls. The hag's gaze never wavered, her eyes seeming to pierce through the layers of my narrative, extracting truths that even I might not have fully comprehended until now. 


And so, in the dimness of that tent, surrounded by the scent of rotted wood and wet moss, I shared my tale with the old hag, uncertain of where my words would lead, yet inexplicably drawn to the understanding that she held the keys to unlocking the mysteries that awaited me in this swampy, dim town.


Character Name: Garo Alziec
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5'9", silver hair, 125 lbs, Violet glowing eyes, Dark Purple robes with Lime green stitching, armor in pure silver with emerald gems mounted on to it
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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