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Mavienna

By Mavienna

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Mave#0168
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is while roleplaying we use the information we know outside character within contexts in-game further elaborating like someone messaging their best friends through Direct Messages to go help someone whose had a conflict at a different settlement.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when i as a player interact with a game in a certain way to where i have a specific mindset or a goal u want to achieve.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

"Well hello it is indeed a lovely city , I have come here to have an Adventure exploring this city and meet new people. " Mavienna replied and *smiled politely*.

The gentleman: " well well dear, i hope this place satisfies your ends but must i ask who are you? "

*Mavienna giggled* " my oh my, i apologize for that, i am Mavienna i have heard a-lot of the florist here i would like to know where they are? ".

The gentle man answered " next to that tall building over-there you will find mrs violette florina she comes from a family of florist the best ones she will sure be happy to help you."

Mavienna : " thank you sir i hope you have a great day ! " and *waved* as she left.

The gentle man waved back.

Character Name: Mavienna
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: I want to be brownish blonde girl with green eyes and well dressed and average height.
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Blake0205

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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