Jump to content

maxym_3310

maxym_3310

By maxym_3310

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: 冬ʐєṟóṮพó冬#1863
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming describes a player's use of real-life knowledge concerning the state of the game to determine their character's actions.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Carrying out unrealistic or unfair actions like forcing emotes on other characters.
    Status: Denied

"Hi, i am <name>, i came from <Nation> as a merchant to sell goods"

Character Name: Gul Evarius
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: about 6"3, slim but with great stamina
Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

AnimeWolf0080

5OiHTcYQrrhAtWqWEPOLZW4ZtslY7RyajdCPa4I1J_btHy_C4BV0n1P0yrH8ARoLQUkAFHf88kqVPXMq7q2jpeT2FQCxFQ3BXjdLds0SAgdEPEkKioCBHnUFLM6I2ShCht1i2MOQ

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography states that his village was raided by bandit orcs and that everyone was killed. This is a common character trope that we like to avoid, please read up on it more here
  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/
  • Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? Answer: Yes, but only for screen shots
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...