Mellow_18

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definition is on the right track, but they need more detail. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is a little short, please make sure it is 4-8 lines long 

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be in the 3rd person

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Joshua#2340!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Your 24 Hours have expired, however, you can reapply! just make sure to fix the following!

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definition is on the right track, but they need more detail. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is a little short, please make sure it is 4-8 lines long 

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be in the 3rd person

My discord is Joshua#2340! If you have any questions I’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

New Player Hub