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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: melonab
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Perform actions that you would find impossible to do in real life.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Use information within the role that you have obeyed outside the role, for example I see a player for the first time who is my friend and I already have knowledge ooc of what is called his character and I with my character greeting him saying his name.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"Who are you, and how do you know who I am?" you ask, as you take several steps backwards, until you decide to run out of the tent. On your way out, you slip and hit your head. Before you are knocked unconscious, you see the figure of the old hag outside the tent...

 

After a while you wake up again inside the tent, tied to a chair, the old hag looks at you and says "Tell me your story."

 

You sigh and say "My parents had a lonely house in a field, until 2 weeks ago, bandits killed and robbed my parents while I was away from home. My father was a retired guard and taught me everything he knew about fighting and my mother took care of the house and orchards. Now I go in search of a new home and a new life."

The old hag replies "From now on your luck will change and so will your destiny, go your way girl..." and suddenly you start to see your vision turn black."


Character Name: Aria Keint
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: She has black hair, green eyes, white skin and medium height. She likes to dress in brown and red clothes.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!



-Your responses in "How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?" and "How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?" are switched, please put them in the right sections.

-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.


Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.


-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.


If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

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New Player Hub.


 

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