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Richard The Adventurer
  • Rules: Yes
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Stop roleplaying with them
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It is annoying
    Status: Denied

As I settled onto the cushion, I couldn't help but feel a sense of unease. How did this old hag know me? I tried to mask my nervousness and began to recount my story.

"I'm a traveler, on a journey to find the lost city of Zara. Legend has it that Zara holds an ancient artifact, a powerful talisman that can grant any wish to its possessor."

The old hag nodded slowly, her eyes never leaving mine. "And what makes you think you're the one to find it?"

I took a deep breath and tried to gather my thoughts. "I come from a long line of adventurers. My father was a renowned explorer, and his father before him. It's in my blood. Plus, I've been studying the maps and clues for years. I'm certain I'm close."

The old hag leaned back and closed her eyes, as if lost in thought. "The lost city of Zara... I've heard tales of it myself. Many have tried to find it, but few have returned. It's said that the swamp itself protects the city, and only those with pure intentions will be allowed to enter."

I felt a shiver run down my spine at her words. Was I pure of heart? Did I have the right intentions?

The old hag opened her eyes again and fixed me with a piercing gaze. "If you truly believe in your quest, I may be able to help you. But be warned, the journey will be treacherous, and the price of the talisman may be greater than you can imagine."

I nodded, my heart racing with excitement and fear. "I'll do whatever it takes. I must find the talisman and use it for good."

The old hag nodded slowly, a sly smile creeping onto her face. "Then it's settled. I'll give you the key to unlocking the swamp's secrets. But remember, once you enter the swamp, you may never return the same."

With that, she reached into a pocket and produced a small, ornate key. She handed it to me and gestured towards the tent's entrance. "The swamp is waiting for you, adventurer. Go forth and fulfill your destiny."


Character Name: Richard
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: White male with brown hair and brown eyes
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

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  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • I'd like you to take a look over our server lore! Here are some links to help you out!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
  4. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/forum/558-world-lore/
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are related to a notable character!, please remember and your family have been background characters up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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