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Miss_Jessi

By Miss_Jessi

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Its_outra_jess#7395
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Playing your character using information your character would not likely have, specifically information you obtained unfairly in the real world.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Creating or using an overpowered character that make the game unfair and not fun for the other players.
    Status: Denied

Scarlette took a step back and crossed her arms, immediately suspicious. She eyed him with inquisition and attempted to dissect his motives.

"I'm here on a quest, a search if you will. What's it to you?"

Character Name: Scarlette Vonika
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Fiery and unkempt hair for which Scar was named; restless hazel eyes that never seem to settle; shorter than she'd like; invariably dressed in black.
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__Soph

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: 

  • Your Character Biography states that she was in the Phoenix Revolution, which would not add up with your character’s age. Please change this to fit your character’s age. Make sure the lore you use from LOTC adds up to the age of your character.

 

 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! I have also linked the skin colours for wood elves as well. 

 

  • Your roleplay scenario needs to be in third person.

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord at __Soph#3808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

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__Soph

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

  • No edits done within the 24 hours. 

 

  • Your Character Biography states that she was in the Phoenix Revolution, which would not add up with your character’s age. Please change this to fit your character’s age. Make sure the lore you use from LOTC adds up to the age of your character.

 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! I have also linked the skin colours for wood elves as well. 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 


 

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