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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: ProfessionalIdiot#2385
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta-gaming is using outside or out-off-character knowledge and applying it in game, when it wouldnt make sense for your charcter to know that information.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is forcing something unrealistic or overpowered, whether it be an action or a character attribute. I.E. Saying you behead someone in one fell swoop, without giving the other player a chance to respond, forcing the action on them.
    Status: Denied

Stepping off of the boat, Marhyn scans the bustling bazaar, taking in the sight before her.  Though, the sound of a man greeting and questioning her snaps her out of focus.  The large orc woman turns to this dapper man, laughing softly in reply.  "Oh deari nub, nubtin extravuhgent of duh zort. Mi iz juzt here for zum medizinal herbz agh spizez, perhapz browze the local warez."  She smiles down at the man and subtly tilts her head to the side, bringing her hand up to shade her eyes of the beaming sun.  "Mi nub zuppoze lat culd direkt mi tuh da apothecari, culd lat?"

Character Name: Marhyn'Lak
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 80
Physical Description: 7 ft tall, Muscular but a little chubby, teal skin, amber eyes, long black hair/blended brown streaks. Decorative metal bands on tusks, arms, 'n neck
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been put on pending. You must make the following changes before you can be accepted:

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @amelica#8025 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Amelica

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you did not revise it in the allotted time. Here are the errors you’d need to correct: 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  •  Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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