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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: you avoid powergaming by suggesting your going to do the thing instead of actively immediately doing it so there is time for reaction and also just dont do stupidly overpowered things that you shouldnt normally be able to do
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: because it makes it impossible to keep secrets and you do things you shouldn't have known you could have done in the first place when metagaming and also you know things you shouldnt know which breaks immersion and isnt fun and makes the game unfair and is boring and stuff
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

"Uh, hello." He muttered, slowly taking a seat on the cushion.

"Where to begin?" Markus sat to himself for a moment, thinking, before suddenly speaking in a shaky voice.

"I come from outside the walls of Haense, from a less than average household. My father had died fighting to protect me in the Adrian Rebellion as a lowly foot soldier, and we never really had much money. So after he had died I didn't really know where to go, or what to do.

But I know I must do whatever it takes to keep surviving, for my father."

Markus shifts to a much more desperate tone "So please, if you have any jobs for me I will take them, I will do anything for the money."


Character Name: Markus Morozov
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Brown Eyes, Brown hair, 5'9 and weighs 130lb, he has a fairly average body build and wearing old tattered clothes due to poverty.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

I will get to you on your original application sorry for the wait


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @blake0205. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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