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MrMcBlocky
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: MrMcBlocky
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: no being "GOD" be fair with fighting and attacks
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Its unfair UNLESS you some how Have "MIND READING" or "ALL KNOWLEDGE" wich is kinda OP
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: What is this place!?

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: Alvin
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Over All's and a dark green shirt with big leather boots black hair white skin. dark green shirt with a white shirt under
Screenshot of Skin:



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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

-It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.
Please make sure to include at least six sentences and when talking about your character’s actions, Remember to use 3rd person!


 

Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

-It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.
Please make sure to include at least six sentences and when talking about your character’s actions, Remember to use 3rd person!

 


If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord
 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

WIKI
New Player Hub

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