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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: meta gaming is the use of information required out of character to later be used in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is the use of abnormal strong abilitys in game
    Status: Denied

i came here to seek the ones that wronged me a long time ago. i have no bussines with you, please move. 

Character Name: Okkuda
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: Okkuda is 4.1 ft. tall and ways 121 lb. she has red bushie hair with sharp green eyes and a skin full of freckles. she is a small but strong dwarf.
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description, as it has blue, not green eyes. Please fix this accordingly!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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