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Yelisei

By Yelisei

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Reddit
    Discord: Mrtooastyt#8354
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: duno
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: have no qlue
    Status: Denied

please leave me alone and give me money.

 

Character Name: woki
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: strong with blue eyes brown hair
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue (surrounded by quotes) and one action.

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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