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Nasa_Yuzaki

Nasa_Yuzaki

By Nasa_Yuzaki

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming- Its like using your real life think that my character game otherwise should not have.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming- Abusing a game mechanic, like using a villager shop with the hero of the village effect.
    Status: Denied

"I want to be know to the world, I want to master the Bow and explore this new land."

Character Name: XiaYi
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 179cm in Hight, around 58Kg, Asian appearance. He has deep dark brown colored eyes and black hair that looks like its been polished.
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many Errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definition is on the right track, but they need more detail. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that he is from China, we have our own lore and this is a fantasy world. We do however have lore that might be able to help you. I recommend looking up the Li-Ren culture of which I'll link a few posts here

  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/196044-culture-li-ren-culture/

  2. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199683-culture-the-language-of-li-guo/

  3. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/203284-a-look-into-li-ren-fashion/

  • Rule Q&A: No, Unless told otherwise by staff. If you die you just forget what lead up to your death and you forget dying/how you died.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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