Never_Steve

Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

• Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography states that your character invented a sword that lit on fire and could be used as a close and long-ranged weapon. This is not possible; inventions can only be made after you join the server.

• Your Character Name is not a viable human name.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks state that your character is a skilled swordsman. Your character cannot be skilled at anything beyond the most basic level prior to joining the server, as all skills have to be developed through actual roleplay.

• Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application; I am having a difficult time understanding parts of it. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/