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Nalixar
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I try to keep a convincing narrative, namely "do whatever would make the most interesting story".
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It creates an unrealistic narrative that is not only unfair, but also not as entertaining.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Not very used to this type of surroundings, I sit down rather stiffly, and offer my deal.

 


Character Name: Kell de Nox
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Of middling height, with brown hair, blue eyes, and a rather haughty, yet calculating expression. Most people don't like the way he looks at them.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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