Noodles70773

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

•  Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

•  Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/