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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: he would be Metagaming because his character wouldn't know the city was being raided, as his character wasn't informed, the player controlling the character was
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Denied

As Obsidian gets unleashed out of his iron old rusty chains , he breathes the fresh air in he missed for so many years, a well dressed man approaches him with a big smile and askes : Welcome ! what brings you to this lovely city ? Adventure? Wealth? or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society ? Obsidian looks the man in the faces and said , Peace , im looking for peace.


Character Name: Obsidian
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: blue eyes , blond hair , normal height and normal weight
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 

Character Biography

 

Physical Description

  • Your Physical Description needs to match your skin! 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

Personality Traits/Quirks

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks listing is too short and not descriptive! Please make sure it is two sentences long and are explained!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  

Skin

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this.

Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after,  just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message Melpomenne) !

Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!

 

 

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