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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: PandaBoiTJ#2383
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming to me is like writing story based off on my combat skills
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is like being able to freely live in the fantasy world you always wanted to live in through your words
    Status: Denied

Risen in the Shaolin Temple of China Shēdo was always a chaotic child always getting into fights and arguments, but always did excelled at his courses. While they may have been a problem child, they showed the most success and progress with their teachings of becoming a monk. While they were capable in academics and fighting ability, Shēdo did not work well with others. Later after leaving the temple in China, they left on work to search for ancient artifacts. While Shēdo was searching for artifacts, he stumbled upon a researcher and his mercenary. Shēdo could tell they were trouble, as the researcher was corrupted with this ominous power, and the mercenary gave off nothing but the aura of immense raging bloodlust, but the researcher had the artifact they were looking for. After selling their soul to obtain said artifact, it corrupted their mind and body, turning it against themselves. His first soul order was to return to his monastery and massacre the people in the temple who had raised him and nurtured him.
 


Character Name: Shēdo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Shēdo is rather average dark-skinned, slim body built for agility, 1 brown eye while the other is one is stabbed out, at a 5'11 height he wears dark
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions real life groups and nations, such as China. Lord of the Craft exists in a different world than our real world, and real word groups and nations aren’t a part of Lord of the Craft. Please remove mentions of real life nations and groups.

 

→ Your Character Biography states that your character sold their soul. Magic and magic-like abilities/curses must be gained through roleplay on the server. You cannot start with magic or a curse. Please change this!

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's goal connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario must include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description, as the skin’s eye is green, not brown. Please fix this on either the physical description or the skin itself!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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