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By pandas_here

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: just panda#0533
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It's like a fantasy roleplay type of thing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it's around the same
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

I say " i am here to just explore, thank you " and try and walk off not being too rude but not wanting to start a talk because that could cause attention towards me. I try and act like i'm shopping but yet trying to get away at the same time. The last thing i want from this man is attention let alone this area or whole town. I just want to be alone. 

Character Name: just panda
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: small, sorta strong, long hair and baggy clothing
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Your character's name is not an actual name. Please fix this accordingly. 

 

  • Your definition of “what roleplay is,” does not seem to state what roleplay is. Please reword this to the best of your ability. 

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

  • What your character likes about themselves must be two sentences with an explanation.

 

  • Your character must include something they dislike about themselves that is at least two sentences long and with an explanation. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

  • Your roleplay scenario must be in third person. 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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