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    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


My eyes move to the cushion, and I walk over to it, sitting on my knees, and carefully brushing off my dress. "My story, you say?" I pause for a moment, "Well, I grew up in an elven family. It was just me, my mother and father. We were quite well-off, and lived near a community of many folk from different backgrounds and races. At a young age, I had always loved to run around in the grass, and explore on my own, observing the plants and animals the forests and fields had to offer. I would return home late, and spend all my days writing down new, fascinating discoveries I had made about the flora and fauna. As I grew older, I started desiring more adventure. I had enjoyed my homey life, but wanted to see, feel, hear, and discover more. I decided at the age of 21 to leave my home, and set out on my own adventure, and... now I'm here." 


Character Name: Sylvia
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: 5'2, 150 lbs, dyed rose-pink long hair, dark brown eyes. Wears a white dress, and gray sandals. (Would add more detail if I could lol.)
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory & roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  1. example They moved to lift the cloth door to walk into the tent
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  1. example He sat down, She looked around the room, they looked at the old hag and smiled
  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! I'm so sorry but you can't come onto the server with dyed pink hair
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory & roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  1. example They moved to lift the cloth door to walk into the tent
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  1. example He sat down, She looked around the room, they looked at the old hag and smiled
  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! I'm so sorry but you can't come onto the server with dyed pink hair
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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