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Paragorn

Paragorn

By Paragorn

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it is to use data and use it in an advantageous way to achieve something
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I would define it as the action of trying to get the best result
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Paragorn would reply "I have come to defeat my last enemy, the last one standing which shall be executed for taking my parents lives!" As a result, Paragorn would be able to live his life closer to what is considered as "normal"

Character Name: Paragorn
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: strong, muscular, blond hair, blue eyes, strong jawline, tall
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
    • Please Keep in mind this has to be two sentences or more!
  • Your characters Like and Dislike need to both be two sentences! so try to add more to them please
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Chronics#7490, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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