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Ciral Elok

By Ciral Elok

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Confusing the player's knowledge with the character's knowledge, in the favour of the first
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Using words or other means (glitches,...) to force the RP to go in a desired way, overpowering others' will.
    Status: Denied

- "Hiya, Sir, Thank yee for thy help: my boots need repairing, my food storage is empty, and I have half a dozen hare to sell. Would yee know where I can do so?"

Character Name: Ciral Elok
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Well-build, agile and yet shorter than others, Ciral has green eyes and a dark brown skin, almost black.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your metagaming definition, while partially correct is not entirely what I'm looking for. Metagaming in this case would be intentional, and just a player confusing the two.
  • For your powergaming definition, I would like you to provide an example on how powergaming applies in-game, so I know you fully grasp the term.
    • The server used definitions for both terms can be found here.
  • There are a few issues with your biography still, which will be listed out below:
    • You are missing at least two references to the server lore. For more information on the lore, please visit the LOTC wiki, here.
    • You mention a friend of your character, "ajax_png". Is this their actual name?
  • Your skin does not fit the LOTC standards. If you need help with getting a skin, you can always take one from our skin archive.
  • Please expand upon your character's fears, as they are very vague currently. Make sure you explain why your character has developped that specific fear as well.
  • Your roleplay scenario does not follow the required guidelines, please review them below.
  • Your scenario:
    • Must be at least four sentences.
    • Include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.
    • Include at least one action.
    • Cannot include any sort of metagaming or powergaming.
    • Should not project ANY thoughts into emotes. Emotes should only include what others would see, not what your character is thinking.
    • Must be in third person.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ColonelMarb1 to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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