PoshNutjob2

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definition are mixed up. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Character Biography states that she was born into noble family, You cannot claim to be royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy.

• Your Character Biography states that she has 4 brothers, 2 older, 2 younger. Due to the elf's cruse of infertility they can only have one child every 15 years. Meaning that's it's almost impossible for her to have 2 younger bothers unless they are twins. In which case the mother would have die during childbirth, or it's a half brother from the father. You can read up more on the elf lore here.

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves

• Your Character Biography states that she is part elf, part human. Yet your Character race is halfing. Halfings are their own race, I'll link what a halfling is here and also give you the wiki page on half elves/half humans.

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Halflings

2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races#Human.2FElf

• Your Physical Description states what she has white eyes, please note that white eyes typically mean blindness or they lack melanin but the lack of melanin in the eyes means they would be a very pale blue or white eyes but that would come with a unique set of issues like to many lights would hurt your eyes ect. Also halfings typically don't ware boots they have thick leather like feet that are also very hairy. Waring shoes is very uncomfortable.

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be in the 3rd person

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/