PrettyChillGamin

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
 

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Almaris - Lord of the Craft

  • Races - Lord of the Craft 

  • Nations & Major Charters - Lord of the Craft 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
   

• Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that. 
  
   

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
  
   

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  
   

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  
   

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. 
  
  
   

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 
  
  
   

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AlissElyssia. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ GuildedFeathers#0749

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AlissElyssia. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ GuildedFeathers#0749

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.