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Antez

By Antez

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Hexy#3105
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using irl knowledge as an advantage.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: searching up info or exploiting a system for an advantage
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. *Before facing the gentlemen I glare at the city in amazement I say to myself how I've never seen something so populated and wonderful. I then look down to the gentlemen in surprise and say* " uhha? hello there, I'm here to deliver a parcel (or any quest) and might look around the market and the stalls after I deliver this kind sir." *I then question myself if he's got a quest or some shady deal hmm?*

Character Name: Antez Eevos
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: slightly pale skin colour, has a darkish brown hair with a bland "country/nation name" facial features and also has slightly dark, 5.6ft and fit
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Pompilidae

Changed Status to Under Review

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  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Biography makes use of a common trope (Attacked by orcs and bandited) as a backstory. This is not allowed and a more unique backstory is strongly encouraged!

  • Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has been denied at this time! The edits requested were not made in the allotted timeframe. Feel free to apply again at any time! If you have questions regarding this decision, please contact me via. forums or through Discord @ Mingo#2467

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