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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: You avoid powergaming by not assuming the attack will hit automatically, or that the attack was able to happen.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay because it can cause characters to act in abnormal ways and disrupt gameplay.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

I  stare at her and tensely hover my hand over my weapon "How do you know who I am."

 

Character Name: Nocarhi Khuzriur
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: They are 6feet and 2inches tall, 230pounds, white hair, blue eyes, light grey skin, dark colored/skin tight clothes made out of leather and some metal
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AnimeWolf0080

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our skin archive!
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
  • Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our skin archive!
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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