PurpleFlameFire1

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Physical Description's hair... The only way you can have different colored is by dying it (look at this from a medieval point of view) or magic.

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Your actions also need to be in the 3rd person.

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

1. https://app.grammarly.com/

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below

• Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Physical Description's hair... The only way you can have different colored is by dying it (look at this from a medieval point of view) or magic.

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Your actions also need to be in the 3rd person.

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/