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    Discord: Radz#8950
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Give others time to respond to your actions and adhere to combat roleplay rules to avoid powergaming.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it ruins the rp experience if you use something you learnt out of character, it disrupts the rp
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


He would drop to the ground and cross his legs. "I'm looking for the remnants of the dwarves I fought with in the Battle of Urguan against the Mori, but I was injured and sent to Haense for treatment. During the attack on Haense, I was rushed out and fell unconscious. I later woke up on a Haense ship heading to this new land. After we disembarked, I wandered up north in hopes of reaching my kin."


Character Name: Ragor
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: he is a 59-year-old, well built with bronze-like arms he is around 4 9 he weighs approximately 195, jet black long hair and a scruffy beard
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation! bronze like arms?.

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate it appears to be partly ice? Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

 Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation! bronze like arms?.

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate it appears to be partly ice? Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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