RamenOishi

Ø  Your powergaming definition does not match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

Ø  Your character’s biography should be written from a neutral/out of character perspective rather than what other people see of your character. This mean that it should include details such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family or any other important events that have happened to them and not leave things as a mystery. It’s meant to be a general summary of their life up to the current day rather than as a description of what others might know of them/see them as.

Ø  Your character cannot have done/be suspected of doing anything important in the server’s history yet, such as murdering an influential figure like Khel Oussana. Things like this must be done through roleplay.

Ø  While it’s perfectly fine for your character to be known by a nickname, ‘Cuddle Buddy’ isn’t exactly a valid name. Please put your character’s real name in this section as it will be used for your character’s in game profile and simply allow people to call your character by their nickname during roleplay.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø  Your character’s interesting facts & traits must be written as sentences that consist of at least five words.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

You haven’t made the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

Ø  Your powergaming definition does not match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

Ø  Your character’s biography should be written from a neutral/out of character perspective rather than what other people see of your character. This mean that it should include details such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family or any other important events that have happened to them and not leave things as a mystery. It’s meant to be a general summary of their life up to the current day rather than as a description of what others might know of them/see them as.

Ø  Your character cannot have done/be suspected of doing anything important in the server’s history yet, such as murdering an influential figure like Khel Oussana. Things like this must be done through roleplay.

Ø  While it’s perfectly fine for your character to be known by a nickname, ‘Cuddle Buddy’ isn’t exactly a valid name. Please put your character’s real name in this section as it will be used for your character’s in game profile and simply allow people to call your character by their nickname during roleplay.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø  Your character’s interesting facts & traits must be written as sentences that consist of at least five words.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.