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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: XXXA.Satanic#7361
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: an unfair advantage in rp gaming metagaming defeats the purpose of roleplay since it directly violates the roleplaying aspect
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is well for lack of better words boring if there is no way to fight back how can there be any fun
    Status: Denied

well I've come in search for a good journey, or something I've never seen before. you know a place?

Character Name: Leviathan Von Stein
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: he is a man with good posture and a great phasic he wears a grey shirt with a red cloak, blue eyes, brown hair. he's 180 pounds.
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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography features a common character trope, such being your family was hunted by orcs. Please change that.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

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Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ nicki#8300

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.


 

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