Redtrail555

Hello, your application has been:

As you are using a guest account, you will need to make another application to try again. Please make the following requested edits then re-apply:

Ø  Both of your metagaming and powergaming definitions are very vague- try to add a bit more detail to these! The best place to get information is our wiki page :) Metagaming & Powergaming

Ø  As far as I know, "Aquadoris" is not a city, within our LOTC lore, nore is "Redo Village". Please use our wiki page to include at least one lore reference in your character biography, this could be a city name, world event or similar.

Ø  Please re-read your character biography, there's a few spelling and grammar errors.

Ø  Halfling aging is almost identical to humans, and uses the same rate of growth and development. Halflings can live to 150, but your character would technically be akin to an old lady. If you wish for your character to be portrayed the way you've described, you can simply age them as being 23.

Ø  Remember that our server is based in a medieval time period- so having items such as mechanical arms and legs are not very realistic for that age in history. You can have fake limbs, however be careful with the technology that would be available at the time.

Ø  You cannot have any knowledge of magic when you first join the server, so your character cannot have had past experiences using it. Magic is done on an application process once you're established on the server. Please change this :)

Ø  Being allergic to water isn't possible for your character, please change this and be sure to include at least one weakness within your three interesting facts :_

Ø  Your skin is not very realistic to the medieval theme, as the hair colour is very neon and the clothing is extremely out-of-context. I'd suggest editing or getting a new skin. Feel free to use some of the available skins in our skin archive! -Skin Archive

I strongly recommend you make a forum account, as this will allow you to edit applications as well as use our forums for roleplay and ooc purposes.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when reapplying. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!