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RILOH
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information with the character inside the game gathered outside the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Denied

Adventure! I want to explore the unknown, and to see with my own eyes what this world has yet to challenge me with


Character Name: RILOH
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Red haired, tall, not muscular but not skinny, red eyes.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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