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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Joy#3686
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: so in my eye metagaming is unrealistic and doesn't tie in with the roleplay making it unrealistic
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: this give you a un normal power and can make the hole roleplay seem unreal and makes it boring and can take you out of character
    Status: Denied

“adventure my good sir” looking around “where would the closest weapons smith be ,i need to replace a short sword that was damaged,” showing damaged sword “it was damaged by a raid on my camp by some trolls,”

Character Name: Shaeatori zowa
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: of Asian dissent Shaeatori has fallen pail over the time of living in a mountain region and gained a set of red dead eyes
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NotAPan

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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming
  • Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least two direct lore references. The name of the realm is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.
  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. I’d prefer you properly write this out, and try and avoid term such as “ez”. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits
  • Your skin is not up to par with the server due to it being completely unfitting from your race, looking too modern, and having a unwanted message written on it. Fret not; LoTC has a Skin Archive for players who cannot make their own skins, or need a temporary skin until they can make their own. These skins are Free to Use.
  • Overall, improve your grammar, vocabulary, and capitalization.

When you have made the changes, feel free to

 contact me through discord at @mightbepan#9864 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

in our New Player Discord.

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NotAPan

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

→ Here are the changes you had to make.

 

  • Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least two direct lore references. The name of the realm is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.
  • Overall, improve your grammar, vocabulary, and capitalization.

You may reapply at any time.

 

If you find yourself in need of any assistance,

do send a Community Team Member or myself a friend request over discord

and PM them or myself at @mightbepan#9864. I’d be more than happy to help.

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