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rustyyankee
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: russ#5792
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Unrealistic knowledge that came from an outside source
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unrealistic or godly powers that ruin the experience for other players
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

*He doesn’t see my like the others do... perhaps he’ll prove useful....*

“Hello there!”, with a hint of distrust

*reaches out to shake hands, only to notice the missing hand on his right side*

“I apologize... you must forgive me as I couldn’t help but notice....”

“Say... i hear of woman who reside where I’m headed who performs a form of Fjarriauga to restore injuries long ago suffered. Would you care to join me among this grand adventure!?”


Character Name: Ryziul Aery II
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 87
Physical Description: Not much mass to him, tattered clothing revealing a history of battle scars. light grey with a shimmer to it. 5-11, 145 lbs
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Hey there rustyyankee! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server! With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.

 

When you are finished, please message me on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s): 

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @MrMineLoveDude#1404, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

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