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KORLOVSKY

By KORLOVSKY

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: soultaker#4823
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The appliance of your knowledge to your characters knowledge after research.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Putting yourself in the better side of the situation without another's Consent.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

His head hurt from the long boat journey and was suddenly awakened by the loud voice of a bard. " ugh... this was the worst boat trip I've had in a while." Korlov mumbled. " Well you don't get first class for free." The bard chuckled. " C'mon let me show you around." the bard insisted. With that said Korlov got to his feet and began to follow, He soon realized that he wasn't the only person the bard would be leading and by the end of the tour Korlov was one of the only ones left in the small crowd. " Hey pal..." the bard whispered " If you need to get some coin I know a group of mercenaries around here." the bard seemed to change his tone when he said this but Korlov couldn't refuse and offer for his life-long dream. 

Character Name: Korlovsky Greeman
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Wears poorly crafted iron armor, his eyes are dark red, he's a sturdy guy, 6"1, 210 LBS, and his hair is black.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • I would like you to fully review the guidelines found when writing your application and biography. Your biography makes mention to a mythical creature (a dragon) and magic users, please avoid either of these topics and make sure the lore references you use within your application are more down to earth (regular place names, regular events, etc).
  • Also adjust your character traits mentioning these parts accordingly.
  • Your character's appearance, both in skin tone and height is not fitting with the Wood Elves. Please review the Wood Elf lore here, and make these changes accordingly.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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