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snowgowiz

By snowgowiz

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: facyyyyyyyyyyyyyy#0373
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: fun and good to make new friends
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: getting to know new people
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: snowgowiz
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 200
Physical Description: she looks young with elf ears and she is small
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately your application has been denied at this time. Feel free to apply again at any time with the changes requested. 
 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

 

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