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    Discord: kryblade420
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Stand ground, report to moderator/admin
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Out of game knowledge is forbidden, it's essentially cheating
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

 

"How do you know who I am?" I'd ask. I'd open up about how I was narrowly escaped death by the hands of my best friend. How I had known him my whole life. How we grew up to be knights in our village, him eventually the village's executioner. I wasn't always the "cleanest" knight. I'd steal, I'd tax townspeople, bully them if they didn't give me free things. When the Queen got word of this she ordered me to be executed. To be made an example of. On the morning of my hanging, my old friend offered to let me go. As long as I promised to never show my face there again, or he'd kill me himself. So I wandered on, looking to turn a new leaf, to prove to someone that I'm not that old person. That I can change.


Character Name: Teela
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: Nonbinary high elf, medium shaggy black hair. They're about 5'10, 167 pounds, black colored eyed, and wear different kinds of normal civilian robes.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

-Please add more actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

-Your character description states that you are a High Elf, but you chose Dark Elf as your race, please fix this.

 

-Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 
https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please add more actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

-Your character description states that you are a High Elf, but you chose Dark Elf as your race, please fix this.

 

-Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 
https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive


 

If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

WIKI
New Player Hub

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