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Blaze64

By Blaze64

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It's communication through your character, or outside of your character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing an action on a player without giving the player a chance to avoid or stop that action.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

"I come here searching for wealth and statis in the city for my dream of an underground world." He responds with a smile.

Character Name: Blaze
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Brown hair with a red and blue jacket.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you're lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include at least 4 sentences.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and cant involve creepers as a fear.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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