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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: bring information that a character wouldn't know of this world into this world.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: acting away from your race and acting away from your character
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes

 

.I joyfully respond " how do you do! I am off to seek an adventure!" 

I briskly ask for the direction of the alchemist whom I am looking for. After getting the location i thank him and skip off in the direction.

Character Name: viviana
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: lean curvy build. Blue eyes and long blonde hair. I wear a beautiful dress made of scangron silk
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: 

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Please state if you have ever role played before in the “define roleplay and have you ever roleplayed” question. 

 

 

  • Kawaii and UWU are not personality traits. Please fix this accordingly. 

 

  • Your answer to what your character likes most about themselves should be two sentences long with an explanation on why. The same thing goes for what your character dislikes about themselves too. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be in third person. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be four sentences long. 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord at __Soph#3808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.


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__Soph

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

  • Unfortunately, your 24 hour editing period has expired... However, don't fret! You are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change everything that is listed!

 

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Please state if you have ever role played before in the “define roleplay and have you ever roleplayed” question. 

 

 

  • Kawaii and UWU are not personality traits. Please fix this accordingly. 

 

  • Your answer to what your character likes most about themselves should be two sentences long with an explanation on why. The same thing goes for what your character dislikes about themselves too. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be in third person. 

  

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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