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    Discord: GrumpyKettle#3373
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Avoiding powergaming is fairly simple when establishing grounded characters, as in avoiding overpowered abilities, and respecting the agency of other roleplayers.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming creates an unfair roleplay environment by giving the offending player an advantage they would not otherwise have, i.e. knowing another players location or the location of rare/valuable items.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Brynnan eyes the suspended candles with a bit of wonder as she settles into the cushion. She straightens her spine, ready to untangle the vines of her journey into some sort of coherent story. She begins, of course, with the blight. She makes steady eye contact as she describes the ruin, the fallen birds and floating fish that has begun at the edges of the forest. Her breath catches in her throat as she begins to rehash the morning she had left her home. "I was the first up, in charge of my younger brother," she pauses, the memory of his smile stabbing into her chest, "He was sleeping heavily, so I went out to the hives...  They were silent. I didn't notice at the time, but the whole forest seemed silent. I opened the first hive to.. to piles of them, to crushed incubating combs..." Brynnan collects herself, clearing her throat. "I'm sorry. It was supposed to be all of us here, looking for a new start, but my mother and father refused to leave the land, and I couldn't convince them to let my brother come with me, so, I'm alone." I'm alone, she thought again, shaking her head. The rest of the story is unremarkable. Travel by foot, by boat, on the back of horses. There was a spark she was looking for, a hum and buzz that she hadn't been able to find thus far. But she knew it would come. She would regain her connection with the soil and bees, she knew it. However, she felt a little wary of arcane practitioners, especially since there was a less than zero chance that the blight had been the doings of a person, rather than a god. Thus, she kept her ambitions to herself. 


Character Name: Brynnan Salix
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Dressed in clean and finely embroidered garments she has long pleated silver hair and dark grey eyes, which are large and round. She is tall and thin.
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- I believe you have chosen the wrong race, did you mean to select high elf? as your app it more suiting to such

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Smol_Bean~#2377! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- I believe you have chosen the wrong race, did you mean to select high elf? as your app it more suiting to such

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Smol_bean~#2377! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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