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Shadow33105
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: ignore them, report them, log out
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it can make the game unfair for others and can interrupt roleplays
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

Well, Im a prisoner, a wild one I am people say. I've wandered the land, travelling village to village, and ending up in prison. I was orphaned when I was 5, do my parents never tought me how to be good or take care of myself.


Character Name: Zalaph
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 17
Physical Description: pesant clothes, black hair, blue eyes
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!

- Please redo your power gaming  question, it is not exactly what we are looking for. How would you avoid it yourself?

Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- please also make your roleplay response flow and not have it jump back and forth.

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Smol_Bean~#2377! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!

- Please redo your power gaming  question, it is not exactly what we are looking for. How would you avoid it yourself?

Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- please also make your roleplay response flow and not have it jump back and forth.

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Smol_bean~#2377! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI


Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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