Shiozake

Definitions: Your definitions for metagaming and powergaming are both unclear and need some work. Please explain each of them with better detail, so we know you understand how they work.

Backstory: Your character's backstory follows some very cliché tropes, including having their family being killed in an arson - please come up with something more unique. Please take the time to flesh out your backstory, including significant events such as your character's childhood, adolescence and their current life. Feel free to include any events that may have significantly impacted them, an example being the loss of a loved one. Try and aim for at least 6 sentences long.

Character Skin/Description: Your character's description does not match the skin provided, please fix this. He doesn't particularly look like a dark elf either - if he is a half dark elf, please make him look more like so than just a normal elf.

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

Once the aforementioned things are changed, you'll be accepted into our server. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2022.

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.

Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

No Improvement: You haven't edited your application, or fixed any of the problems listed.

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2022.