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Sixninie

By Sixninie

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Lucas#5311
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Giving ingame information over fx discord where you say that you're captured and they should come to rescue you. Or being ooc
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you do things that shouldn't be possible or is unrealistic.
    Status: Denied

My character would try to have the shortest conversation possible because of social anxiety. He says, yes, indeed, sir, you wouldn't by any chance know where the nearest place to get a beer is?

Character Name: John wiliams
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Brown eye,s Brown hair, average height, and weight,
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Melpomenne

Changed Status to Under Review

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why you’ve been denied. 

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

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Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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