Snecko1

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Both your meta-and powergaming defintions are not up to par with the . Please review the meaning of both these terms here, and rephrase them in your own words.
   
• Your character biography, although good in length is still missing two lore references.
  • You can find the LOTC lore here on the wiki
  • The specific race lore for the Dwarves can be found here
  • If you require general information on the realm we are currently on (Almaris), please take a look at this page, for the previous realm Arcas, take a look here.
  • Examples of these lore references can be historical events, characters or places. Be sure they line up with the age of your character and the current year we are in in game (currently we are in year 8 of the second age).
     
• How would you define roleplay, and have you ever roleplayed before?
  • Make sure you answer both parts of this question, as you have only given your definition of roleplay here.
     
• Note that for Dwarf standards, your persona's height is not short, but average!
   
• Your personality traits must include at least one major flaw, be sure to add this!
   
• You did not fill in your roleplay scenario yet, be sure you do so following the guidelines below:
  • You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
    How do you respond?
    If you’re having trouble with this scenario question, feel free to contact a Community Staff Member in-game, on the forums, or over discord.

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message delfshadowleader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI