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SnowyInformant

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: GoatGuyGerard#7672
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the usage of knowledge gained out of RP to gain an advantage in RP.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when one carries out an action of overpowered, god-like nature or taking an action which contradicts the traits of their character.
    Status: Denied

"Ha- eh well." I'd stumble, before regaining my cool and saying: "None of those I'm afraid sir, rather I'm here for the magnificent markets of this astounding city. I'm here to buy supplies." I'd pause briefly, before holding out gloved my hand for a shake. "Arnaud Von Grissen, pleasure to make your acquaitance sir." 

Character Name: Arnaud Von Grissen
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: He wears a moss green tunic and cloak as well as pouches and a small leather backpack . He is pale, has white pupils, black hair and is 1.76 meters.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

→ Your Physical Description states that your character has white pupils, this is not possible, please check the wiki to see which eye colors are possible for farfolk.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Farfolk

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!




 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord SuperGuy#7443. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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