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Spidey97
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: darwincorporation
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: You avoid power gaming by only using physical abilities and realistic actions aka emotes or preforming unfair events so to avoid it you make sure that your character does realistic and possible/fair feats if unsure you contact a staff member
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming makes it so that the character is using out of game information it disrupts the RP by creating it unfair and using OOC knowledge can lead to a ban
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: 

Brikrer entered the tent as he sat infront of the woman on the cushion.
"Hello my name is Brikrer of the Grandshot line, My father was Brabof Grandshot known for both his leadership and his skills with a sword in the lands of Windgrip, He taught me how to lead and fight. He was not without his faults although he did not show it to the ones he knew."

Brikrer hastenly proclaimed to the old hag, as he took a sip out of one of his flasks, he continued with just a breath and a sip taken:

"I've come to vanquish all foes to this lands starting from the evil dragon of this land"

Brikrer finally ceases to speak and just as hastenly he raises his hand towards the old woman with his palm downwards as the young man says: 

"This rune on my hand proclaims the name of the beast, Goitiodu our people call it."
The old woman reacts with a feint laugh and replies:

"Ah yes I know this dragon of which thee speak of, unfortunately for ye it is not a dragon but a great beast non the less"

Brikrer replied:

"I understand, However I shall work my hardest to vanquish this great beast from this land that I will call home."

As he was replying he turned around walking out of the tent waving his hand back at the woman as they probably would never see eachother again.

Brikrer  grew up from a young age learning to be a leader in his old lands" He was a Lord back then but when he came to this new land he is a commoner.

Brikrer  Is a friendly Human and is 6'2 and he loves to make friends.

Brikrer  is a warrior and soon to be a strong huntsman.

Brikrer is a proud human who loves the thrill of adventure and is willing to explore where ever he can.

Brikrer's parents were Brabof and Ceirrin Grandshot. His family was nice to him and everyone around them as they believed Kindness goes a long way. 

 

Brikrer's mother was a farmer however his father Brabof was a warrior for the town they lived in growing up which was called Windrip a human town. Eventually after some arguments with the lord at the time refusing to step down from the Chair of the Lords of Windrip Brabof did the unthinkable and forcefully pushed the former lord off the chair of windrip and then Brikrer was named heir to windgrip a human town

Brikrer got into trouble as a kid and was caught sleeping on the job as a warrior of windgrip. His father spoke to the Captain of the guard of windrip and had Brikrer pardoned for sleeping on the job.


Character Name: Brikrer Grandshot
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Brikrer is a strong human male he prefers to fight sword and shield as his father was called Brabof Grandshot he is on the heavy end brown hair
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

Please remember to include more backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it

Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

You plagiarized another person's app. Using part of another players app.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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